Since we have been learning all about narrative stories, I thought we could write a fun narrative together here on our class blog. I will start off with a story starter, then you can carry it on by adding a sentence or two.
Things to think about:
- Does your sentence make sense?
- Have you included description and detail?
- Have you checked that the spelling and punctuation is all correct?
Don't forget to come back and have a read again one day soon; who knows what twists the story will take!
So lets get started!
The fire had completely burnt out during the night. It was so cold that I woke up shivering and sniffling. I could hear Dad's loud snoring, so I knew he was still sleeping soundly."I'll get the wood for Mum" I thought, and I slipped on my shoes to go outside. I barely had the door open when I saw her looking right at me. . . .
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Mum was one step ahead of me. She was half asleep and instead of wood she had her gardening tools in the basket.
ReplyDeleteI could hear her mumbling,"Daffodils,daisies,dandelions","Get back to bed I told her.
ReplyDelete"What are you doing up at night" mum said. "I was just getting the wood for you" I said
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ReplyDeleteI thought to my self why is mum looking at me I said I was just getting the wood I told her the first time mum said to me go to your bedroom now mum told me.
ReplyDeleteMum said "why are you up" ? "I was just getting the wood because it is so cold". I thought I would light the fire.
ReplyDeleteMum was right in front of me. I thought she had the idea of getting some fire wood because it was really cold and she chucked me in the fire wood basket! A fterwards stamped off to bed sleepily.I really wondered what had gotten into her.
ReplyDeleteI thought for a bit I might go and get some fire wood very quickly I just shut the door oh no here's Mum
ReplyDeleteThen Mum said " I told you to stay in bed and were you going to get some firewood " I shook my head and said I was going to get a glass of water. Suddenly Mum grabbed my hand and said " we need to talk " so I went down stairs with my Mum and she croaked " do you know my real name " I thought for a bit I was about to say something when she answered for me " of course you don't my real name is Lender Holesworth and I am your step mother.
ReplyDeleteHer face was pale and her eyes glazed over, her eyelids slowly closed and she fell heavily like a rock to the hallway floor. I stepped over her limp body. I fluttered downstairs to open the rough blue sliding door. In came a green and blue twister swirling and twisting around the room. I shouted 'get out' and I slouched down on the couch. I lazily flicked on the TV, it burst into flames. Out came three ghosts from my sisters bedroom, I murmured to myself 'why is this happening to me?' I screamed at the top of my lungs and the ghosts fluttered back into the bedroom keyhole. I got up from the sofa and walked over to the blue door hoping the twister wouldn't attack. All was quiet outside, I got an armful of wood and stumbled back through the door. I took off my shoes and went back upstairs to light the fire. I got back into bed and my alarm clock went. Brrlliiiiingggg.
ReplyDelete"You you you are my step mum" I stammered trying not to look confused. "Of coarse I am you nitwit!!" "Ooooohhh! So that's why you always where brown instead of rose pink." "Ok I am going upstairs now." "Oh no you don't if you say a word of this to your father you are grounded for 5 years!!" "Why?" "Beacuse he doesn't know I am your step mum..."
ReplyDeleteSchool on Monday. I cant wait.
ReplyDeleteYay school on monday i what to go now no you don't want to go now why because it is ten a clock at night no i want to go now okey you can go now yay i am here bey mum hey were is eveyone mum mum wait wait why am i the only one here because you are 1st one at school let's go home and you can have a rest for the night then you can go to school okey i can't wait yay.
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